Silver pen c&c please

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This is one of my favourite images I have taken for my portfolio. C&c please.

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I like the image, but I think it could stand to be a bit brighter, and I'd rather see a gradiated transition between the black and blue than harsh line.
 
Overall I like the photo however the pen either needs to be perpendicular to the table or have more of a slant. Right now it just looks lazy like it didn't feel like standing up straight. Agree with tirediron on the transition.
 
Nice, the pen is a little cocked to the right and the camera a little cocked to the left. Good concept.

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Thanks all, yes the pen is a little off, the shot was actually taken with a slant of about 25 degrees and the only way I could think of doing it was to hang it by fishing line. I had to set the table at an angle to match the pen. Obviously didn't get it quite right. Shot is SOC apart from editing out the fishing line.
 

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