I like the image, but I think it could stand to be a bit brighter, and I'd rather see a gradiated transition between the black and blue than harsh line.
Overall I like the photo however the pen either needs to be perpendicular to the table or have more of a slant. Right now it just looks lazy like it didn't feel like standing up straight. Agree with tirediron on the transition.
Thanks all, yes the pen is a little off, the shot was actually taken with a slant of about 25 degrees and the only way I could think of doing it was to hang it by fishing line. I had to set the table at an angle to match the pen. Obviously didn't get it quite right. Shot is SOC apart from editing out the fishing line.