Simple Industrial C&C

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  1. Skyclad

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    As you know, im still borrowing my moms Fuji FinePix A900 camera, so my shots are still very plain and basic. Plus I like to keep any Photoshopping very, very limited.

    Anyways, with that said, I wanted to try taking a picture of something industrial. But living in a small town in AZ, theres nothing too industrial out here, so I took a picture of my neighbors roof AC unit. Hopefully it has some depth to it (as plain as it is) and doesn't look too snapshot-ish.

    Any tips or comments on what could or should have been done (or not done) for being so limited?

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    hmmmm needs a artistic touch right now it looks and sorry to say like a snap shot
     
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    ...good example of what a YORK AC unit looks like.

    I just...I think it'd be better if it had a jet engine on it and doubled as a rocket ship.
     
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    No need to apologize. I had a feeling it would. I put it on "beach" setting to take the picture which is why the brightness of it isn't popping out at you. I wanted it to capture the dull industrial aspect of it rather than having it look modern.

    What would you suggest for as artistic touching?
     
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    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    oOOH! Work your magic er11111a!
     
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    ok here are edits from request
     

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    whats so funny erose :p
     
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    I like the first edit! But I don't think you went far enough er111a. maybe change perspective with the bubble effect, or add someone to the picture, or something flying in the air like a griffin.
     
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    :lmao:
     
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    ^^+1 :lmao:
     
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    Don't encourage him.....please.....for the love of god!!!!!:madmad:
     
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    Its a basic boring composition and boring subject, but its technically decent. So not really much to say other than, maybe be a little more creative. However, for an Air Conditioning brochure, this would be great.
     

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