Simple Potraits

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by KMS, Mar 9, 2010.

  1. KMS

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    1)the focus seems to be off. Try to move it to the eyes or bring your apercer down to 9-10 area
    2)same as (1) like this one best out of the 4
    3)just dosent do anything for me.
    4)looks a little dark but im thinking thats what you were going for.

    Saying this i have not done any better :er:
     
  3. KMS

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    Yea, 4 was supposed to be dark. Thank you though :]
     
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    1. Out of focus
    2. Out of focus
    3. Out of focus
    4. Kinda scary...
     
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    i like 1 and 2, but as stated the focus is soft in each. 1 also seems kinda weird, almost blocky like around portions of her hair. was this image cut out from the original image and pasted on a white background, or is it just the focus/hair style playing tricks on me?
     
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    Photo 1 is as other have mentioned, out of focus and you are getting too much spill from the background.

    Photo 2 is out of focus but shows the most potential
    Photo 3 comes across as a snap shot.
    Photo 4 ????
     
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    No copy and pasting done
     

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