Simple studio shot

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  1. fmw

    fmw No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I've been fooling around shooting fountain pens on the commercial/product forum. I put this little set together about an hour ago to shoot a pen. I thought I would post it here in case we could motivate folks to post any studio shots they may have.

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    I really dig the shot...it might make it a little too cliche, but I think it would be fun if the crayons were lined up to make a proper color wheel...just a thought.
     
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    nice idea and great.....COLOUR! :lmao: :mrgreen::thumbup:
     
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    Thats excellent. Remenisent of a dart board.
    I really like the circle pattern created from the black on the paper closest to the tips. A tighter shot or crop of just that would be nice as well.
     
  5. fmw

    fmw No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Thanks for the positive comments. So let's see your studio shots. Avid, here's the crop you requested.

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    my eyes hurt on the second one! ahhhh! i love the idea though.
     
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    Would it be improved by having the same part of the labels all facing the same way?
    I know the text would be upside down on some but it would give the shot a more repetitive feel since there are several of the same item in the shot.

    just a thought!

    And i prefer the cropped centre....until I've seen all the labels facing the same way then i may change my mind!!
     
  8. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    The first one seems to be dancing (in my eyes it does! ;)) ... there is movement in there, so it seems. Not so with the second, not for me, that is. So I think I prefer the closer crop. That one's a little less irritating.
     

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