Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by DramaDork626, Jun 21, 2005.
somethign about the facial expressions here doesn't seem to work for me. to be brutally honest, i just don't believe them. They look too innocent or something to me
hmm, i spose I can sorta see that.
Please give us more info on the photo. What was your intention for it and what were you trying to capture? It will really help us to provide quality feedback.
I like the effects and style you are working with here. The only real thing that bothers me as such is the girl's left arm. It is washed out too much and gets cut off in the edge of the frame. My work computer monitor is not the best (cheap defence equipment) but the arm catches my attention when I feel I should be looking at their faces. Also I found the rubbish(?) and stacked chair legs in the background between them, a small bother.
However, after looking at your 3 posts I do see some talent and a definite style in your work. Keep on shooting
I dont really care for the overexposure here.
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