since he lost his job...

Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Trombone, Jan 19, 2005.

  1. Trombone

    Trombone TPF Noob!

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    right, this is my first post in this forum; this was taken in November 2004.

    Nikon FM2
    Ilford HP5+ 400
    Nikkor 135mm

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    any comments?


    Peace,
    Trombone
     
  2. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    This is a photo with a lot of impact. It speaks a lot.
    You seem to know very well what you are doing.
    Welcome to the forum and keep sending us photos!
    (My dad was in your country only in October, mind - with a group of cyclists, going to all the places by bike).
     
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    danalec99 TPF Noob!

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    I like the mood and the story!
     
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    I love it! good job!
     
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    really really good! :thumbup:
     
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    wow... thats amazing. I love the emotion and the story captured in his face
     
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    one of the better on this board!
     
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    Trombone TPF Noob!

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    Thank you all for your comments.
    will post more very soon, although i'll have to wait till monday maybe in order for me to find the time to surf arround the site and comment on other's work.

    more comments are always welcome.


    Cheers,
    Trombone
     
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    Hey, that looks familiar. You found this forum I see :)
     
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    Trombone TPF Noob!

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    No walter, it's the CIA,they told me: "Follow that Intellectual Lefty :x , see what he's up to..."

    I'm glad you'r here too ;-)


    Cheers,
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    shardsofxapril TPF Noob!

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    wow I'm new to this site so I'm not sure if my 2 cents means much but that is an awesome shot. composition is spectacular and everything is has to tell is there. awesome work mang
     
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    I do like the photograph. But I think the photo would stand stronger with at least one part of face being in extreme focus. The gentleman has life lines that would create more of a personality or a since of who he is and where he has been if they where kept in focus. Maybe a quick falloff in the DOF.

    He just looks like hes got more to tell than what was captured. If thats what your going for then congrats the photo does a fine job of that.
     

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