Sister-In-Law Prom C&C

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  1. bkristopher

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    I just starting to get back into photography and these are my first pictures from a new D90 with 18-105mm kit lens. The day was overcast and I was handheld with about 8 other parents. It was pretty much a free for all and most of my pics had prom goers looking in all different directions. I was likely between aperture and shutter priority modes and focusing manually. Not sure I did such a great job with my focus. I am still getting acclimated.

    Some of the better shots. I am interested in your thoughts.

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    Are kids really wearing jean shorts to prom these days?
     
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    Oh, you probably want some crituqe huh?

    1. Seems to be lacking some contrast. Colors are really soft. I don't like the hands in the pockets either.

    2. Would have like to see a shallower DOF, though a nice shot... Again, hands in the pockets. She's all nice and close, cuddling up... and he's got his hands in his pockets. That distracts me.

    3. B&W is a poor choice for this shot. There is too much variance in contrast... you completely lose the subject in this picture. It took me a few seconds to realze that people were actually hidden in there.

    4. Nice shot, would have like to have all of the legs in the shot. Also not a fan of the B&W here either... the subjects get lost.\

    5. Very "snop shotty". The cars and the extra people in the background take away from the shot considerably
     
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    lol, looks like they are taking a picture with the seniors. Its probably her syster or familly.

    we are in 2010, senoirs wear 1000s $ dresses hand rent limo for proms! :p
     
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    Thanks for the C&C. Here is another treatment I provided to her.

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    Correct. The sisters.
     
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    Lol, the kid looks way too young to be a senior anyways :)

    I think you need to take them all in color or what is the point of having the beautiful dresses in all sorts of color? :)
     
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    I took a sophomore to my senior prom.
     
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    i love the bridge in B&W
     
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    kids get a bit lost in #3
     
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    I love #2. I think this is the best as far as composition out of your set... the others are not really directed towards you because they're looking at another photographer... ( as you stated being free for all and what not.) But all-in-all, very cute shots. Im sure they will like them :)
     

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