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  1. trodgers

    trodgers TPF Noob!

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    4x5 paper negative positive.
    i like how her eyes relate with her nose and lip piercings.
    it sort of looks like a statue, probably because this was lit from below, but also because of the expression. she looks like stone.
    comments or suggestions?
    t.r.
     
  2. themonko

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    i dig the title. This picture really sets a mood. I don't have much critique, but I like it.
     
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    Very interesting image...I wouldn't have guessed it was a she... For critique I would say that maybe just a tad more light might help...the ring through the nose is a little hard to tell that it's a ring b/c its too dark. Just looks like two white scratches...but too much light would probably ruin the effect you were going for...
     
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    it looks like the mirror from snow white. haha.
     
  5. Rob

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    I feel that this image could benefit from a tiny amount more light and a tighter crop.

    Just my opinion though.

    R
     

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