Sky shot..

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  1. teishu

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    Hi,
    What i can i change with this to improve it ? Do differently if i took the shot again ?

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    you did a good job here, i would maybe frame it better in on the moon because it took me a while to find it in there but other than that good shot, like the contrast between the branches and the clouds.
     
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    It seems like you were concentrating on the moon, but its hard to tell because it wasn't framed tight enough and it seems very loosely framed, just tighten it up next time u take the pic. I do like the contrast.
     
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    Well what about this..?
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    I was zoomed closer on this.
     
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    i think im missing some of the clouds that contrast the branches on this one.. what do you reckon ?
     
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    much better comp.
     

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