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Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Leigh, Jun 23, 2007.

  1. Leigh

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    One of my many little sisters. (the only one that will bloody pose)

    All taken in my living room today.

    All c&c's welcome - If you dont tell me I wont learn.

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    My favorite is number three. I like the poses. In your living room? What kind of lighting so you use?
    I just applied to be on your forum as KathiR :)
     
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    I like that one too, only thing is, you can tell where Ive tried to photoshop her baggy eyes.
     
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    Sorry forgot the lighting question.....
    ive got 2 interfit stellar 300's, one with a reflective umbrella and one with a diffuser. I have to move all my furniture out of my living room to set up the backdrops and everything at the mo so its a bit of a pain in the bum.
     
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    I bet it is fun to work with your little sister! I think #3 is my favorite. The saggy/wrinkled backdrop bothers me in most of the others.
     
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    yeah shes a giggle, she's the only person i can really practice on. No1 else will pose for me
     
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    Love the pose in #4! Looks really natural & relaxed.

    Is it my screen but in #1 her palm at the base of her fingers seems very bright & #3 her top is too? I don't think you needed to PS around her eyes as they seem unique & draw the viewers attention in. (Do you still have/can you post the original with the "bags"?

    On #3 also you could use a colour filter to minimise skin blemishes & freckles (yellow I think?) Maybe could be applied in PS but I'm not too sure how.

    Overall a good, natural and pretty model & some great poses!
     
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    I like the 1st one the best, the pose is the best in that shot I think.
     
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    I like these, I think they're very good.
    # 5 is my favorite!

    Only a couple things I noticed though....
    # 1 - What's going on in the top left corner? Looks like you missed your backdrop.
    # 4 - I like the pose, but she's leaning too much on her right arm. Doing so makes her upper arm look much larger than it really is.
     
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    Hey, good job! I like #3 the best mostly because the focus seems best around the eyes and face. I do like the poses in the others too.

    I, also, registered on your forum. See you there.:thumbup:
     
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    Only one I had any problem with was number one.. the crop was a little funky but otherwise I like them all. I would have chopped off the lower half of the image.
     
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    Nice work, I really liked #3 till you mentioned the PS'd under eyes. I didn't notice them till you mentioned it, which means a little more tweaking would do it.

    Now to return the favour bribe her with a nice lunch so she'll keep posing :D
     

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