sleeping couch

[Treymac]

Hey guys. I've taken a lot of photos that I've put in black and white, but never one of a person before. I've never really taken many people shots before. How did this come out, I like it but I'm kind of biased.

 

[Treymac]

it's not that bad is it?
I guess I didn't give a direction on what to critique, but what is you feeling toward the picture? Good, average, bad?

 

[Boden]

Well, there's a whole lot of coffee table, and three really blinding bright spots. It appears to be slightly crooked. To somebody who isn't familiar with your subject, it just looks like a snapshot of a guy who owns a giant coffee table trying to take a nap but can't because of all the shutter noise.