Slip and slide action shot (7/4/08)

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Mr. Vapor, Jul 7, 2008.

  1. Mr. Vapor

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    I don't find the image as a whole pleasing. Car, Roof, Tree, and maybe even the girls in the top right are distracting. I think closer, more to the side of the boy would have looked better.

    Otherwise it looks like fun!
     
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    I agree. Exposure is good, but composition is wanting. Try cropping everything out that's above the grass level.
     

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