Slippery Summer Fun...

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  1. mpasq66

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    Mostly "snapshot'ish" but fun. Mid-day, lots of sun, white tarp= exposure hell!

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    If you see anything worth C&C, please do... other than the cut off limbs. (Hey, they were coming pretty quick!!!!!) :lol:
     
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    only pic I like is the last one.
     
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    I think you did a great job exposing these pictures. What camera was used?
     
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    as a set of photos it works super well

    if you showed me just the first or second one I'd say you need to zoom in more.
     
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    #1 looks like everyone's about to have fun, I agree about zooming in more. Mostly because I think the guy off to the right is a little creepy.

    #2 Again, probably would have zoomed in or out so that little girl in the back didn't have half a head.

    #3 I like this and the color and light are great IMO. If only her foot was on the mat and you could have gotten all the same color background. The strip of grass kind of brings my eye there, and there's nothing there but a foot.

    I really like the last one, but it make me o_O cause I thought it was a slip and slide and the liquid there looks like... milk or something?
     
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    1st one needs a crop, but its still a good pic. I like the last one the best, but i think 2 and 3 did a good job capturing emotion! It looks like a good time!
     
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    I really like the third one. It captures the moment really well. My recommendation would be to try a tighter vertical crop, to cut off most/all the grass to the right, and a little on the left, so that all you see is this great family race down the slip n' slide. Digging the little s-curve you have going on as well.
     
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    Misleading thread title. Lol
     
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    lol... dish soap actually ;)

    Thanks for the feedback everyone...it is all very much appreciated!
     
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    Rebel XS

    Sorry.... :mrgreen:
     
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    Last one is my favorite very interesting
     
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    And it was an accident...while trying to dive outta the way before I got plowed over!!! :lol::lol:
     

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