Smokestack sunset

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  1. audiobomber

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    My first attempt at a sunset, posted for your critique:

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    You might want to read how to post pictures here.
     
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    They looked fine in the preview, they posted properly, then they disappeared. They show up fine on my screen now. Can you see them?
     
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    i dont see anything
     
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    I don't see anything!
     
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    Sorry, I'll shuffle them over to Imageshack and try again.

    Edit: OK now?
     
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    yep.

    i like the lone duck in the first shot, but the third one has my vote. the colors in it pop the most, IMO
     
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    Thanks Spiffy, I appreciate the feedback. I guess everyone else gave up on seeing the images. :blushing:
     
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    If the first one had just a bit more light it would be awesome. Nice work, I like all of them.
     
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    The last one looks like the factory is making the clouds. I like it alot.
     
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    Last one is the best. The smoke looks just like the clouds, kinda scary
     
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    I actually have a version of the first one with a bit more light, and I do prefer it, except.... there's no duck in the other version. There is a swimming beaver, but the beaver's head just looks like a log in the water, so I went with the duck. :D I suppose I should have increased the light in pp. Thanks for the feedback.
     

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