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  1. Scott WRG Editor

    Scott WRG Editor King of Smoothness

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    This picture was taken rather quickly this evening and isn't that great a shot. I was just curious about suggestions for improving it.

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    F/3.5 at 1/13 sec on my 20D with 18-55mm EFS lens
     
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    IMO there are too many objects fighting for me to look at... I like how the snow is falling though, it's pretty cool. I think it would be better if it was just the motorcycle itself :)
     
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    i like the shot, especially the DOF!
     
  4. Scott WRG Editor

    Scott WRG Editor King of Smoothness

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    Not quite what you asked for but close

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    I prefer the larger shot. It's as interesting as heck for me (but then I ain't never seen now). Gawd, don't everthng get white?!
     
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    Gosh, that looks c-c-c-COLD!!!!!!!!!! :shock:

    I'd like to see that same bike shot with a shallower DOF to put more emphasis on the frozen bike. It's the bike that's the most fun to look at for me. :D

    Hope you got out of that weather fast after taking this shot, Scott!!! :wink:
     
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    Scott WRG Editor King of Smoothness

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    Here's another one from this morning

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    More here
     
  8. Nikon Fan

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    I like this one much better Scott!!!! Wish I could have a little that snow here!!!
     
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    OH Lord, thats making me cold. Whose motorcycle is that? isn't it going to get ruined out in the snow??
     
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    The second one, where you isolated the motorcycle (from a similar angle as the first one) is my favorite. Very cool effects with the hanging snow and falling snow in motion.

    As somone said, maybe it would be better without the cars in the background. But strong either way.
     

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