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Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by gob144, Dec 17, 2008.

  1. gob144

    gob144 TPF Noob!

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    I had to edit this with paint because im at my parents house for xmas and they dont have any programs. C&C please be picky.

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    1 and 3 I like, 3 has a better composition I think but 1 has less of what looks like dust showing. 3 also looks like it has a bright spot near the top. I like where 2 is going, but to me it seems like a little less open space (or maybe more?) would improve the shot.
     
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    I like three...what are these? Do you have any color shots...just wondering what they look like ;)
     
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    mrodgers No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    They are candles...
     
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    I like 2 the best.
    It seems like in some of them, 3 esp, there is a reflection off of the tip of the flame, and it kind of distracts me a little on all the shots from of the lighter candle. It looks the most naturally lit to me in 4. 4 might look interesting if it were cropped to be more symmetric.
     
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    that stuff on it isnt dust just wax causes its a candle. and 4 is symmetrical you just gotta scroll your screen right to get the rest of the picture. thanks for the comments. Im bored at my parents for xmas so is there anyway you guys want me to shoot these as like a project?
     
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    oh yea and they are awful in colour the whiter looking one is hot pink and the dark one is neon green.
     

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