Some B&Ws - C&C

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  1. Clancyz

    Clancyz TPF Noob!

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    Two randoms, C&C harsh plz :)

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  2. Jaszek

    Jaszek No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    The first one is under exposed and I think for a rubic's cube you should stay with color to show the contrast. With the second shot the big blown out spot is drawing my eyes into it.
     
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    I like the first one pretty well. I think the exposure is fine - just some noise on your left surface.

    The second is really interesting - a little weird, and I'm wondering what gave you that idea.
     
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    The second picture felt like it was missing something. This is going to be really creepy, but something like an arm dangling into the picture dripping "blood" into the tub. I don't know the weird position of the feet makes me feel like the person is feeling faint and needs to lean against the tub wall...sort of an understated emo vibe.
     

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