Some beach pics of the mommy and daddy :) CnC please :)

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  1. shortpballer

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    Took these on the beach in Hawaii. Let me know what you guys think.

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    i love their expression and connection in #1. #2 i cant decide just yet. am kinda leaning to thinking they'd be better a bit further away, but i really enjoy the hand holding and closeness. :)
     
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    I had a whole bunch farther away. But I felt like it was about them, and not the scenery. So I chose the closer ones because it accentuates them...
     
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    maybe the scenery shouldnt be so pretty then as i cant help but wonder whats behind his head :p

    but hey...at least your horizon is straight heh heh :)

    in all seriousness though i like them, but they seem to contrast. i focus 100% on them in the first one, but in the 2nd i see them but my focus is more on the background, and the foot prints in the sand. :(
     
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    is it me, or does it look like her foot is chopped off in #1
     
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    Good job on #1.

    I'm assuming you used flash for #2? If so do you think you could have underexposed the ambient a bit more to get more color in the sky? The composition of this photo bothers me but I don't know why. Either the angle of the distance, not sure which.
     
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    his head looks fuzzy to me in #2
     
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    Yes I used a flash. The angle could be whats bothering you considering I was using shooting at 12mm... so it makes them both look a little distorted and "taller"
     
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    I like both,good job! did you do a silhouette on #2 pose?may be too cliché but i think it would have made a good shot
     
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    I think I did do a silhoutte of the second one but it looked a little too cliche like you said...
     
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    #1 is beautiful, very good job!
     
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    Thank you :) I really like their expressions in #1. I think it tells the viewer that they really are happy not just posing...
     

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