Some Big Birds (not the yellow one)

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  1. NateS

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    Please c&c.
     
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    Nice closeup photos. Crits:

    No1: Dont like the leaves and branches intruding on the right hand side.

    No2: You cut off the a$$ feathers

    No3: Pitty about the shadow running across the face.

    No4: I would prefer the entire face and mouth in focus.

    Just being very critical here but dont get me wrong I do like the photos!
     
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    The third one (the flamingo) is my fave....I don't mind the shadow too much as you can see a bit of the branch that's being shadowed, and it doesn't interfere with the eye. (Of course, ideally the shadow wouldn't be there)
     
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    Thanks for the response. You're critiques are the same one's that I noticed. I tried to clone the branch out in #1. I got rid of one, but no luck with the remaining branch (the worst one).

    Thanks for your comments. The flamingo is my favorite out of the group too. I have mixed feelings about the shadow.
     
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    #3 is definitely the best, but again, the shadow......
     
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    Here is my very quick and poor attempt at removing those branches and leaves.

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    Wow good job for a quick attempt. I need to play around with it some more I guess.
     

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