Some C & C?

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by Whinnie, Dec 29, 2009.

  1. Whinnie

    Whinnie TPF Noob!

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    Thank you guys on this forum. Only a day here, and I already got off my lazy bum and took more pictures. Because I wanted to improve! So I want to hear what you guys think. Hopefully my freezing of the fingers was worth it :lol: Don't be afraid of hurting my feelings- I need to grow a thick skin
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    [​IMG] Is it too snapshotish? Only one not taken today
    #2
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    #3
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    #4
    [​IMG] Not a fave of mine, but its ok
    #5[​IMG]
    My favorite one
     
  2. Shockey

    Shockey TPF Noob!

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    1 I don't get.
    The second one has potential, go back and take it when the light is better try taking it from ground level and cropping the sky out, try some angles.
    3 4 are snaps.
    5 crop 1/3 from the bottom and pump some contrast in the sky then maybe.
    It looks like your sensor may need a cleaning.
    Keep shooting and experimenting, looks like you are having fun with it.
     
  3. CoRNDoG R6

    CoRNDoG R6 TPF Noob!

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    In my honest opinion:

    #1 could probably be more appealing if it were possibly taken as a vertical shot instead of a horizontal one.

    #2 could be tilted right so it can be centered horizontally, plus a bump in contrast could help livin up the picture.

    #5 could also benefit from having less tilt to it, thus making it easier on the neck.

    Thats about all the input i can give...im new to this as well! ;)
     
  4. TJ K

    TJ K No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    They are all way too centered. Either the subject or horizon or both. I would keep that in mind next time you go out to shoot. Also it looks like some of the whites are blown out in the shots.
    TJ
     

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