Some critique please???

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  1. bnkrecords

    bnkrecords TPF Noob!

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    Havent picked up my cam in a while... went out the other day and shot some of my daughter... what do yall think? I threw sepia on the first one as well...

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    i like the first one. i like her smile in the second one. the second could use some light. it's all in the shade so it looks a bit flat. and perhaps move her further away from the upright blue things to blur them up with narrow DOP. mabey crop it to a portrait layout? if you boost the contrast on the second it could be nice.
    i hope you dont mind i did some of what i just mentioned on photoshop.
     
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    cool, i like the crop idea.. as far as the contrast, i dont mess with it when dealing with my kids, it brings out too much pigmentation of the skin...
     
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    hmm. ok then. how bout we turn down this face contrast but up a bit on the shirt and hair?
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    yeah i like that... i wish i had photoshop... lol
     
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    One thing's for sure, if nothing else is: your daughter is a little beauty!
     
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    Thank you very much...
     
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    Your first picture is fantastic. I love your daughter's face and the way the sun comes across it, very stunning!
     
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    What's to critique? Nice work.
     
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    What a beautiful little girl! I love the first one!
     
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    thank you very much... I broke my lense, so now i have to wait to get another.
     
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    She is cute girl regardless of the photo. And her pose is natural pose, at least for now. Wait couple more years and you will grin in facing painful poses, it's coming for sure.:D

    For the sake of chosing I chose number 1.
     

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