Some critique

Hung Over Harry

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This is one out of a series that Im getting into. Just thought itd be nice to have some critique on it. Maybe post some later!
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hey that's pretty good...i like the idea that you are going for.

suggestions: this may just be me...but i'd like to see a teeny bit more of the face, or less, like cropped at the top of the neck. and again, this may just be me. i do like this close crop though. it seems that the photo is dark on the left, and light on the right. it just doesnt seem balanced. sorry if im critiquing super deep. i couldnt think of anything else :)
 
Yes! The body form and your composition seem on point. The light gives nice shape (chape).

The shadows are a little detailess, and I would kick in some highlights. As we all know; the print is the only judge of those details.
 
thanks for the compliments/critiques!

The shadows are what I was worrying about actually. I wanted deep shadows but i think they might have come out too deep.

I welcome super deep critiques...no worries! :)
 

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