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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by neptune000, Dec 26, 2007.

  1. neptune000

    neptune000 TPF Noob!

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    Hey!!

    Newbie here.. still trying to learn the ropes - i am posting a few of my pics. Could you please let me know how good/bad they are and what all i need to improve upon? Was mainly concentrating on aperture shooting. All the pics taken with a Sony H5 btw.

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  2. Lorielle99

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    3 is just lovely
     
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    the only problem I see is 2 has motion blur it seems...and the rest are a little flat. (contrast/saturation wise). Otherwise...you're doin well so far.

    6 is a kind of boring subject...if it was closer, you might have something.

    Your shooting would benefit from the rule of thirds I'd say.
     
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    yes, i was also wondering about that 'Flat' bit in the pics... so how do I improve that - while taking the pics? I am just using a trial and error to see how the pics come out.. any hard rules/ rule(s) of thumb to be followed?
    and also while post processing? though I think thats not a very good thing in a good photo - if you know what i mean
     

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