Some Industrial Shots, C&C Please!

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  1. BTilson

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    You have done a good job capturing the feeling of the place. I think with some more interesting angles and subjects within the same place, and without the border-blur, you'd have a good set. So many things are centered, and that's exactly how you don't want them.
     
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    I love all three of them, dont change them in my opinion.
    First one is amazing :), Im a big fan of industrial shots.
     
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    Three more from the same shoot:

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    BT.. totally unrelated to the pics.. i was looking at your flickr... the taskforce case that i see in the pics... did it come with the foam??? that looks like a killer camera case
     
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    Nice! Love this genre. #1 & #3 are a bit too yellow and green respectively for my taste, and I'd like to see them leveled/perspective corrected, but aside from that, I really like all three of these images. #2 especially. You've got a great balance of colour, tone and texture. Well done.
     
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    #3 Makes me feel like I'm looking down into the image which makes me feel a bit woosy which is strange..

    I like the green tint in the last 3 2nd post... but they are all really good!..

    so did you change the hue or what to get the coloring?
     
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    Chris, yes it came with the foam. It really is an excellent case, especially for the $25 price tag.

    Tasha, Yes, I did a lot of playing with curves and color balance in these shots. Going for a sort of gritty/lomo/cross processed look.

    All - thanks for the input and compliments.
     

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