Some more of my stuff, please tell me what you think

[kayliana]

 

[johngpt]

Hello kayliana.

I like how you placed your subject off center, and giving space at photo right for your subject to be 'looking into.' Your subject's head is spot on the intersection of the left third and the upper third lines, a classically pleasing composition. The left hand, in a relaxed pose, says your subject is very comfortable with the activity.