Some Moths (?)

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  1. Bellagraphics

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    I love the macro shots but I am not sure I am cropping them right.

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    The crop should make you happy and be balanced in your opinion. Cause when you ask about crops it's all going to depend on who answers.
     
  3. Bellagraphics

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    Well then any suggestions or comments to help improve them is welcome.
     
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    well in my opinon they all need this
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    Less exposure... a simple one click correction I'm sure there are others who will help you out in other ways.
     
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    I like the shots, but the 3rd one is a bit blown and overexposed. Nice captures though.
     
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    Cropping is very difficult on any shots where flowers are used for backdrops..
    you always have leafs/ stems/ etc. that cause fits.. However if in a shot like this ,( Butterfly) as subject, if butterfly is strong enough , it will pull you out of a so so crop.... but on these , they all show Very harsh lighting and exposure... The butterfly is just not popping...( contrast ) from the backdrop...

    I think Mysteryscribes crop/ and saturation shows you how you need to shoot tight, and pop that subject from your background..

    Thinking your biggest problem here was with the Harsh Lighting..
     
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    Peak summer sun in Arkansas! I will try to adjust for that now I see the difference. Thanks!
     

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