Some of my people photos

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  1. Silihari

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    Hello everyone. I am new to this site and would like to share some of my portraits I have taken of me and others. I have been doing photography for about 5 years and just got my Canon xTi about a year ago. I would like some C&C please!

    These two are me:
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    And my friends:
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    Hope you like!
     
  2. STICKMAN

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    Nice shots, keep at it.............
     
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    Nice work, the first one of you is very good.
     
  4. DragonHeart

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    great shots... I have to agree, #1 is a great shot of you.
    keep up the great work!
     
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    That first shot is gorgeous. I like the effect of the green tinge and the way you framed the shot. You're a great model, too!

    It might be just me, though, but that first shot feels like its slanting down to the left ever so slightly. Have you tried rotating it like .5% counter-clockwise?

    Also, for the shot with your friend with the umbrella, is this a crop? It feels a *little* tight, and I'd like to see it moved a bit to the right, so there's less of the door in the shot.

    Having said that - they look awesome - look forward to seeing more of your work!
     
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    Beautiful shots. I love the self portraits. #4 seems to have a slight yellow tint to it, but other than that I liked them. And I have to say, you are beautiful!
     
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    Hmm thats just how I took it. I could rotate it a bit to make it better. Thanks for letting me know!

    And yeah I zoomed in a bit in the umbrella pic. Once again thanks for the critique! You are very helpful.

    And thanks everyone else too!
     
  8. KabeXTi

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    Nice work. I love a girl with tattoos :drool:
     
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    Well, im not a pro by any means.. But I really like first picture.. And your tattoo is really really nice!
     
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    cool work, watch out the sensor dirt.
     
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    love that first one, the colors, setting, everything
     
  12. ArtPhotography

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    I think the first two are framed and composed really well. I also like the color wash on the third and fourth a lot. As was mentioned before, the girl with the umbrella feels cropped a little tight. Overall, I really like your work. Keep it up!
     

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