Some of my Pictures, let me know what you think.

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  1. deepdesign

    deepdesign TPF Noob!

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    Let me know what you think. Any comments are welcome. thanks in advance
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    all pictures were taken in manual mode.
     
  2. Clikon

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    I'd say you know what you're doing. The kid is absolutely beautiful. However, your Red Bull can is dented.
     
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    Personally, I think the first one is way too dark and doesn't have much composition. It's just not intriguing to me. The little girl is gorgeous though I must say. And I really like the dew on the tree. Your red bull can should be on an ad haha.
     
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    I agree with this, although if the first picture had more light I think it'd be more appealing.
     
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    Love #2 and #5...not sure what #1 is...I think it's too dark.
     
  6. sabbath999

    sabbath999 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Welcome to the forum.

    Just a quick tip. It would be easier to see your pictures if you resized them to 800 pixels or less... while I have a 24 inch screen, not everybody does.
     
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    Beautifal color on # 3
     
  8. MarcusM

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    You've got some decent shots there. Nice used of DOF, nice focus.

    My only recommendation is to get an EXTERNAL FLASH! And never pop up your built-in flash again, lol:lol:. You will be amazed at the difference.
     
  9. deepdesign

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    Thanks
     
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    thank you, I will hopefully be getting a external flash and a 50mm 1.8f lens for my nikon d80. So hopefully Ill be able to make somemore good pictures.

    erik
     
  11. deepdesign

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    I agree, The color is good, however I need a macro lens for getting in closer. I was trying to focus on the drop and I could not.
     
  12. lucki85

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    I'm totally new and probably shouldn't be commenting but I figured I'd add my 2 cents. (although don't take too seriously).
    I think #1 is just a little bit too dark, and the top of the vase, glass, or whatever is cut off (Not a big deal I guess...I would've liked to see more). I do like the idea of the picture though and I like the blinds in the background.

    #2 is Great! She is so adorable. I don't really mind pictures that are cut off (although it may be starting to sound like it!) but I wish I could at least see the whole eye on the right.
    Picture #5 is a cool idea too, but the black in the lower right corner is kind of distracting. Thanks, hope you don't mind I added!
     

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