Some photos of mine, c&c welcome

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  1. TBAM

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    Any comments and criticism would be greatly appreciated
     
  2. maulrat

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    #1 is a little too bright for me. It also appears that you might have taken it a little out of focus, then oversharpened in pp. Nice job leveling the horizon.

    #2 is my fav. I wouldn't change a thing.

    #3 is a little off level. If you had done this intentionally, perhaps rotating just a little more to show that you meant to do that. Nice DOF :)

    #4 is a little boring to me. I don't see how you could have made this shot look any better.

    Keep up the good work :D
     
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    #2 definitely stands out, but I feel it can be so much better! I hope you don't mind, but I had a quick go at it. I found your conversion a bit too grey.

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    I like the one of the guy reading the form guide...Hawkesbury race course by any chance???
     
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    #2 is great. I like the PP on it. #3 is good too if the background was a bit cleaner.
     

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