Some pictures of my daughter for c&c!

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  1. Kempe Photography

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    I value your comments...

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    in my opinion you have overcooked the image and they look 'fake' / unatural. im guessing you have pushed the sharpening way up high ??
     
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    Cute kid, but...

    The PP is way overdone. I realize you want the eyes to stand out but over doing it is worse.
     
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    I LOVE these pictures!! You daughter is adorable and oh my those eyes!!!!! Did you do any photo editing to make her eyes pop like that in photo #1? My favorite picture is the very last one! I am new (very new) at all of this photography stuff and am looking at these photos like an average joe but from what I know (and what anyone else whose not a photographer knows) they are great!
     
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    The first one has wonderful skin tones. And I ADORED the last shot, the B&W with just the top of her head. IT is like she is peeking over something. The second photo looks washed out, so you may want to convert it to a sepia or monochrome.

    Again, really dig that last shot.
     
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    oh my gosh the last one is amazing!!! The rest are cool too.
     
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    Your daughter is adorable! I definitely love the last shot! It's so cute! Her eyes are gorgeous and the first shot really makes them pop!
     
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    Im usually a huge fan of B&W pics..but...they just seemed lifeless to me.If your going to turn the picture black and white... i think i may have left the eyes Blue regardless of the surroundings. Baby has some beautiful blue eyes :) Id take advantage of those. The photos are all amazing! haha, i like the last one... look like shes peeking and got caught.:lmao:
     
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    I really like the last shot, very funny/cute.
     
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    she has really beautiful eyes but i agree they look fake and a little too close up.
     
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    I agree with that. They would be striking against the grays and blacks... again, you're baby is beautiful!
     
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    Thanks for your all your comments guys. Please edit them to your taste to see if you can make them any better...Will be interesting to see.

    I shot these F6 so eyes are just as they were when I took the picture. I've actually turned down the clarity a bit on them all.

    I can see what you mean about image 2, could do with being warmed up a bit just like image 1.

    I look forward to your edits...
     

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