Some Portraiture

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by One Sister, Apr 2, 2008.

  1. One Sister

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    I'm new to TPF. I'd like you to look at some recent work for critique. Thanks.

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    Welcome to TPF! I like these two photos. The first one I might've asked her to change her position so her leg wouldn't have been cut off. Otherwise, very nice.
     
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    i like the angle on the second one. it's a nice way to do a full length portrait. the ladies ear sticks out a bit though. if you have her turn her head a bit more it will even out the lighting a bit like the man's (i still like some shadows on the side of her face) and hide the ear a bit. or mabey even just drape a bit of hair over it like with the little girl. pretty family.
     
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    Thank you all for your critiques, I will take your suggestions under advisement. Thanks again.
     

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