some school/office shots - urban - C&C thanks!

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  1. austriker

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    Hello,
    so i am back again, this time with some photos that i think are better than my others. i hope i am improving. some shots i like.. give me some criticism, tell what you think.

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    2. cropped version of 1
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    3. arc. shot of some buildings that i like but turned really grainy (can i fix it with gimp?)
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    4. urban shot, kind of abstract
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    5. tree
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    another 'school' shot
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    thanks!
     
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    How'd you manage the 4th? It looks like you've over-layed another image.
     
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    i just got really close to this parking arm thing. shooting with the 50mm at 1.8 (i think). its pretty weird, not really what i was intending but i like it. its not layering, i dont really post process my images besides iPhoto
     
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    What kind of camera are you using?

    #1 & #2 - #2 is a better composition. They image appears to be exposed properly, not sure about the white balance. Interesting point of view.

    #3 - Not sure what I'm looking at in this one...it seems very noisy. Really don't care for it.

    #4 - Interesting shot...you aimed down the hollow part of the parking arm...very different.

    #5 - What is the subject of this shot? The pot? The wood chips? Or the tree?

    #6 - What is the point of this shot?
     
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    None of them really do anything for me, Try shooting more interesting shots.

    1&2 are composed the best out of all of them.

    What camera are you shooting with?
     
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    i am shooting with a d40, 50mm 1.8 lens and a 18-55.
    #3- really tried to show the different shapes of the blgs and how they intersect, but the sky turned out really really grainy.
    #5- the subject is the woodchips (in focus) but i like the tree solid colors
    #6- just the simplicity of the chair. a version of straight photography which is shows well composed normal everyday things in new ways
     

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