Some Sets, c&c please

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by swutchadian, Nov 28, 2009.

  1. swutchadian

    swutchadian TPF Noob!

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    My first time posting here. This is a couple of critique sets for a photo class I'm taking. The glossy paper didn't scan as well as I would've liked, but what can you do? Comments and criticism encouraged.
    Set 1 - Its not my fault I'm afraid of dolls (I lost a negative strip in my schools darkroom and found it the next day, which explains the scratching on 1 and 3, 2 was done in the developer for cohesion)
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    Set 2 - Night
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    Thank you in advance!
     
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    Love these film shots! Very good work! Your third shot is killer. It looks like a scene from right out of the old days. I can't imagine how hard it is to shoot with film, but I will nitpick how blown out (too bright, lacking in detail) her dress is in the photos. Its a bit hard to distinguish between her skin and the dress, so next time maybe tone the exposure down a tad next time. Your night time photos are awesome as well. I especially like your movie theater sign shot. Excellent subject for film, I believe. Good work.
     
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    i like the night shots of 4 and 5. they really have an "old" feel to them. :thumbup:
     

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