Some shots from last night

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  1. MrKnapp

    MrKnapp TPF Noob!

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    I just got some new equipment that I started playing around with yesterday. First time ever using external flash and off camera flash. Let me know what you think.

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  2. DRoberts

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    I like #1 how the hair follows the shadow line...would like to see your lighting come from a little higher and just a bit more head on.
     
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    Nice work!
    1. Very nice
    2. Seems about 1 - 1 1/2 stops under-exposed; as well, would like to see some of the RH side cropped off; the 'fridge doesn't add much to the picture IMHO.
    3. Nice pose, but again about 1 stop under
    4, 5. Well done, I like the use of shadow in these.
     
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    Thank you very much for the feedback, it's very much appreciated. I will continue to post when I get the chance to shoot some more. :D :thumbup:
     

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