Some snow shots, and a few others; C&C?

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  1. iBats

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    C&C please
     
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    #1 the snow flakes are a tad distracting

    #2 a little off in composition, I like the subject, the weather, just tell a better story of it.

    #3 get lower on the flag, shoot from the bottom.

    #4 & #5 need to rethink what you want to portray, what do you wants us to see ?
     
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    5 is strange. Is that a fake sky or did you do something crazy in editing. It just looks unnatural. GL
    TJ
     
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    nope that sky is raw and unedited or imposed, the point of 1 is the snowflakes, and 4&5 were just to shoot from different angles not really trying to "say" anything mr. existential

    lol
     
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    ibats, I was trying to be kind, you asked for C&C, so let me open it up a little. If snowflakes were your subject then you have too much in the background, so when trying to show me snow you shot a "distraction" and #4 & #5 I can see clearly different angles, kind of mute, Oh boy another building :er:
     
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    hahaha i know dude im just messin, also the building in 4/5 is a very well know coffee shop where i am from so
     
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    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Ah, so you are just taking snapshots. That's cool.
     
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