Something a little different from me (5 pics)

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  1. Karalee

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    I can count on one hand (two fingers actually) how many times I have intentionally shot people :shock: so when I got the chance today to work with a model I was both really excited and extremely petrified :lol: Its crazy how much stuff you have to think about when your shooting people! Heres a few from this afternoon, please let me know how I did on my first 'real' shoot.

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    Thanks for looking!!
     
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    #1 :thumbsup:
     
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    These look really good to me! The only thing I would suggest is to do some retouching to her skin in 1 and 4. That way they will have a true "model" look to them. After that, in my opinion, they are print ready! Great job!
     
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    Beautiful Stuff. I like e'm all, but would retouch the close up just a tad.
     
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    #2 & 4 for me. I'm not a big fan of the pose in the 1st and last, but I've seen it done a lot in fashion shoots so it must just be a personal preference thing. I can't believe this is really your first true shoot, you've done an amazing job!
     
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    I like them all, but I think #4 might be a touch close for comfort. Great effort though - really like the catchlight detail and control of the light.

    Rob
     
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    Nice series Kara :D
    I think #2 is my fav.
     
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    You did marvelous Darling!!! Absolutely LOVE #2 !!!
     
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    i think you done a good job. nice colours and poses

    i think the focus is a little off on the second. her feet seem more infocus than her face
     
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    #2 & #5 are my favorite. I'd like to see a reotuched #4
     
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    I like this series of shots, nice work.
     
  12. Karalee

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    Wow thanks so much. I was a bit scared, because I was only shooting available light (dont own a 'real' flash yet) so I was quite suprised I didnt get too many nasty shadows.

    I did some retouching to those other two this afternoon, do you think its too much? Also here are another couple that I kind of liked so far....

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    and this one kinda reminds me of Anja with the wall and pipes and what not:lol:
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    And lastly for now - Im going to have to revisit this one later on, it looks a bit overprocessed to me
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