Something Missing (C&C PLEASE!)

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  1. SonyShooterA200

    SonyShooterA200 TPF Noob!

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    I feel as thjough something is missing from these images to make them pop. any ideas?
     
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    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    #1 is out of focus, but a decent shot.

    #2 doesn't pop because it is all midtones. There are no dark darks, or light lights. So it's a brown wash. But the focus and detail are good here.

    #3 pops, and looks like a successful image to me. :thumbup:

    #4 see #2.
     
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    I liked #3 the best - though it is still life, it gives a sense of drama. The leaves and background give a dilapidated feel. This image works! :thumbup:

    #1 will have worked if the focus was better.
    #2 does not tell anything. This may have worked better if the whole door was framed with its mount perhaps
    #4 - feels very bland
     

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