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Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by chrisu002, Apr 19, 2005.

  1. chrisu002

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    good subject! but i do'nt know if it was your intention to focus on the left part of the flower, but i think it would have made a much better image if you closed your aperture a couple of stops to bring more of the flower into focus, or perhaps move in a little closer but change the angle and still included some of those rusty nails in the background.
     
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    Great DOF and I like composition except I'd either show where the flower meets the boards or get rid of the shadow.
     
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    Nice shot. I like the repeating nails. I wish there was more detail on the stem. Also, I'm not crazy about the plant/flower blurring on the upper top right. Perhaps the image could have been taken a little bit to the left (because the plant overlaps a nail).

    John
     

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