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  1. shardsofxapril

    shardsofxapril TPF Noob!

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    just something abstract that I wanted your opinions on
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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    What an interesting object is this?
    Have you tried to get even closer to it - into it somehow? Would have made the photo even more abstract, I think. With the background to be seen and recognised, it is not quite as abstract as I would have expected.
     
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    shardsofxapril TPF Noob!

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    well it's built over that small pond so that was the closest I could get to it haha
    it's some kind of a metal structure / abstract art
     
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    It seems like the crop is a bit tight - my eye keeps looking for resolution about another foot up. I like the reflections in the pool... it might be fun to go back and see if you can get more play off of that. I'm really curious abut what's going on w/ the rest of the sculpture.
     
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    shardsofxapril TPF Noob!

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    well here's a nother pic of it but again it's kinda cropped off
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    The second shot works better for me, except for the slant which looks accidental to me.
     
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    woow very interesting! I like it!
     

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