Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by sparc872, Jan 9, 2005.
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It makes me dizzy, I feel like I'm falling. I don't recognise it and it is blurred. Sorry. Not for me, this photo....... ale:
heh, maybe you want to get a lower cost digital camera to play with for a while... film gets expensive to learn how to shoot. at least with digital, it won't cost you anything to "learn" not only that, but you get instant satisfaction in your shot
you have some interesting ideas & unique perspectives, i'd keep trying... someday you'll refine it to the point where we will all Oooohh & Ahhh
Looks like railing posts. Yeah far too blurry.
As far as composition make it "just" the railing. Lose the door and anything else.
turn your screen 90º counter clockwise and it'll clear a lot up.
i think the photo would look a lot better if you changed the exposure like so: shutter speed faster so you wouldn't get the shakes, and the apperture wider to get a smaller depth of field and compensate for the shutterspeed. apart from that, i like it. very creative indeed[/img]
lol, until you rotated it, i had no idea that it was railings in the hallway, i thought it was looking down the inside of a piano
Yes, I like this MUCH better now. No more unnecessary blanching here ... .
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