Sorry for two posts-Opinions Please #1

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  1. elsaspet

    elsaspet TPF Noob!

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    Sorry about the double posts. I am looking for opinions on some new stuff I am trying. The genre is photojournalism. Please respond, and please be as critical as possible. Thanks for looking!

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    elsaspet TPF Noob!

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    Would that take away from the expanse? Hmmm. I'll try that, thanks!
     
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    Chase I am now benign! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I see the idea behind it, but something feels like its missing. For some reason it seems like the foreground is distracting me a little rather than leading me to the building. Maybe there is a little too much happening on the street?
     

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