Space Needle *critics please*

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  1. Skyline

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    Anything I can do to make these pics even better? I need some reference so I can try take better pics when I go there again.

    Thank you,
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    i really like the first once, if only the mountain were more clear
     
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    I like the second one better. Shot a little bit later... includes a
    little bit more of the city, and a little less uneventful sky. Pretty
    nice shot. Maybe another shot just little bit later than that one?
     
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    less sky... much less sky. there is nothing there and it only competes for attention. too bad about the mountain not being clearer. they're nice shots, just need less sky :)
     
  5. Skyline

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    hm... probably just need to take the sky out? because if I point the camera lower, there's a park and lots of trees down there. I'll try to crop it soon :) thanks for the idea.
     
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    done! let me know what you guys think now :)

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    Now straighten out that horizon and you have yourself a winner. :D
     
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    cropped version is my favorite.. great work on the composition as well, i like how the buildings shrink off as they go through the frame
     
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    I agree that the cropped version is gorgeous! Great shot.
     
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    I really love the second photo, excluding the mountain in the background which you can hardly see anyway. some good editing there. I'd consider a UFO flying around maybe.....???
     
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    the edit looks great :) less sky for the win!
     
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    double expose during dusk and then daylight. There's your shot.
     

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