Spiral on downwards

Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by vixenta, May 24, 2005.

  1. vixenta

    vixenta Hands Off Me Haggis!

    Mar 27, 2005
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    I took this at the top of a staircase in a shopping mall in Glasgow. Nothing like i'd planned it would turn out to be!

  2. ferny

    ferny TPF Noob!

    Aug 31, 2004
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    I like it but I find the blown part at the bottom very distracting. I'm wondering how it'd look with the main part on the left of the image as well. So it's not straight down the stairs and not in the centre. So you're sort of looking at it from an angle. The left part would appear straight and the right side would lead off (I'm not making sense am I?).

    I like the different shades of brown, but I'm also wondering what would happen with a contrast boost and some B&W treatment.

    With the twisting and the blue at the bototm it's a bit like looking down a whirlpool.

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