Spirits

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  1. DramaDork626

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    Ok, this was very hard to do, I am VERY afraid of graveyards. But I was in phillie for vacation and this is where ben franklin was buried and my parents wanted to see the graveyard so I got dragged, figure i may as well make the best of a bad situation. My hands were shaking like crazy though...
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    Hows the angle, and the contrast? TELL ME! OR I SHALL BITE YOU
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    The composition is a little rough. Mostly because of the building and street light. It does not seem to fit the old cemetery. The contrast is good, but I would kick in some more highlights.
     
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    yah, i thought those might be a problem...
     

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