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  1. Akoz

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    C&C please

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    nice work
     
  3. Akoz

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    thanks kanmai,
    does anyone have any constructive criticism. i am trying to improve any constructive criticism would help.
     
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    Its a tad busy. But a nice shot overall. How does the color version look?
     
  5. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Well, I take it this is the colour version? I can detect colour here, anyway.
    Nice. Was it rain? Was it rain and a pebble thrown into a puddle at the same time?

    If only that "climber" had climbed a tad more. It is a bit small in all the other rings and bubbles and splashes and all. But if this really is a puddle, then I say there is little could could have done differently... focus definitely is where it should be, and exposure also looks ok.
     
  6. Akoz

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    it is a puddle under a bridge and water is droping from the bridge. yes it is the color version. i was thinking of croping it a bit more. croping out the top and bottom a bit more.
     
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    This one might be better[​IMG]
     
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    With the drip being the point, you need to emphasize that more. It's to busy and has too much space for the eye to wander to other ripples. Isolate the drip more.
     
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    i was thinking the same, tighter crop on your 'focal' point
     
  10. Akoz

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    when i crop tighter it does not look good. atleast i think so [​IMG]
     
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    wow it can be use in desktop..:)
     
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    ?????
     

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