St. Augustine Beach

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  1. Tuna

    Tuna Supermodel

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    All comments and critique greatly appreciated.

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  2. Chase

    Chase I am now benign! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Now this I really like...

    The contrast in color between the ground and the sky, the visual elements that start with the wood in the foreground and leads your eye up through the picture all the way to the trail of birds in the sky. There are a lot of elements of interest in this photo for me and they all mesh together well.

    The only question I have is that the image seems a little soft to me. Could just be the monitor I'm using, but it feels like things should be just a touch sharper.

    Overall excellent shot though, I really like it.
     
  3. Karalee

    Karalee hOtLiPs!

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    ^^what he said. I could try to say it but it wouldnt sound as good. And extra points for the way you captured those birds!
     
  4. JonMikal

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    st augustine beach as in 30 miles south of jacksonville?
     
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    Nytmair TPF Noob!

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    yeah... what the Chase-meister said....awesome photo!

    i really like how there are a lot of different things... the fence, the sky, the beach, the fencing, the birds, the 2 people.... really nice!
     
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    Nice!

    Almost looks like a painting...
     
  7. isheahan

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    Great composition... broken lines, wonderful contrast in colors and hues, birds... oh those birds, how perfect... you are blessed to have been able to capture that picture, now go sell it and make some money!!! ;)
     
  8. DocFrankenstein

    DocFrankenstein Clinically Insane?

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    That's wicked.

    1) good job on getting the sky exposed properly.
    2) birds are in perfect position... gives a sense of direction
    3) people and houses provide the scale
    4) the garbage is cool too... otherwise it'd be boring
    5) the blue deposits on the sand are cool too... means some metal is present there... forgot which.

    COOOL pic. Can I have a copy? :D
     
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    Works a treat for me.
     
  10. John E.

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    Great picture, all the elements work very nicely together. A picture to explore, not just view. :salute:
     

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