Stair Well

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  1. darin3200

    darin3200 TPF Noob!

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    This is a shot I took quickly in a stairwell at a college. I was trying to show the empty whitness along with the symetry present with the stair and door.

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    *Bump*
     
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    hmmm. I think aesthetically its pleasing, but I don't really get any concept from it. I feel that its too close a shot to express loneliness. If that makes sense?
     
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    For me, I dont like the stair well in the pic, for a more empty, lonely look take it without the stairs in it.
     
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    Feels very flat to me. Not getting much depth out of it. Maybe a reshoot with a shallower DOF?
     
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    I agree. I like the color, but the door alone might be a nice shot.
     
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    I like it, works for me, but would try cropping a little off the top and bottom
     
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    possibly better in black and white... also you could try and change the angle to get more of a 3d photo
     

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