Standing Life!

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  1. Moni

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    Another photo of our stage program. Here the man standing, represents LIFE and the other one is DEATH!



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    ...and yet the LIFE guy is still and the DEATH guy is moving! Nice!
     
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    Or maybe death is creeping by and life is trying to let it pass without drawing attention to itself.
     
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    You have a great topic, and I like how there is motion blur and stillness mixed into the picture. I think the light was well done; however, the problem is that there is plenty of dead space above his head and you cut him off at the ankles.

    I would just like to understand why.
     
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    Actually, Moni, I'd give a try at just cropping around "Life". It's got the capacity for a great shot I reckon.
     
  6. Moni

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    Thanks you two :D

    Actually I'd to cut cause...the floor was showing there :S
    Which is of gray color and that may cause problem :S
     
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    I like it. I like it a lot. I would like it better if the lifer was outcropped from the waste up or even a tight 3/4 or even a head shot
     
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    Awww.. come on Moni.. do the crop and repost mate. I wanna see it.
     

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