starry night

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  1. AbbyLuv87

    AbbyLuv87 TPF Noob!

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    happy to finally have photoshop back (for another 30 days!) i know the basics (i guess) but heres just something i did with it. c&c please...:lol:

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    srt86hil TPF Noob!

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    I think there are a few hairs growing out of her leg there.
     
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    cant say i like this.. cause it'd be a lie..firstly you can tell its photoshopped.. secondly the cigarette in her hand looks bad, thirdly.. stars arent yellow...and fourthly.. it just looks photoshopped..
     
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    I like what you were trying to achieve but I like the original better
     
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    astrostu I shoot for the stars

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    I agree with Chris. This just looks tacky.
     
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    looks like she is sitting on a bale of hay and smoking-bad idea as she may go up in smoke ;) However it is fun to play with photoshop and the picture isnt my cup of tea, its fun and I am sure you had fun, so kiip playing and see what other things you come up with :)
     
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    I think it's a good attempt. You could also play with adding colour to certain parts of her like her lips or her dress.
     
  8. tirediron

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    As a photograph, I'm afraid I don't like it. As an exercise in learning different aspects of Photoshop, well done. What I would suggest as more practical exercise if I may, would be to work on the original image. Learn how to remove the red-eye, experiment with levels and curves to even out her skin tones, and practice cloning techniques by removing the tatoos on her wrists.

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