Stay by the fire C&C please

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  1. kravjitsu

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    I took these the other day when i was in the city and wanna know what everyone thinks about them.

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    Quite a bit underexposed and no "pop" . . but the subject matter is super!
     
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    i actually really like these, i also like the exposure with these certain photos. you should title it future chicken nuggets.
     
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    I think the under exposure gives it the cold dark look. I like it.
     
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    Yea i figured having it a bit underexposed would make it look a little more dirty and cold. Thanks for the c&c
     
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    Personally i like alot 2 alot more, just more of the fire... IMO in the first one, theres too many birds, and too little fire. however it feels like the birds are a bit soft in 2. i like the composition tho
     
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    #2 FTW !
     
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    Yea the fire does make a nice contrast to the grey of the birds and the street
     

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